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Stella Yay ^_^ :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 17 2 Yay ^_^ :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 1 2 Stefano with uniform :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 3 3 Traditional Jan :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 15 3 Aka X Kuro Pocky :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 8 0 Kuroko/Akashi :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 19 4 Kein Female Ver. :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 7 0 Cupcake :iconblackrock89:blackrock89 3 0
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How to evade making a Mary Sue
The “Mary Sue” Guide
This guide is meant to introduce and/or inform you of this threat that is currently attacking storywritting, drawing, Original Character creation (OCs) and fandom/fanfiction in general, not to say Originality itself!
During the course of this guide, you will learn what a Mary Sue is, you’ll identify one when sighted and, most importantly, you will not create one and hopefully you will help others in the subject, so they don’t create Mary Sues too.
I) Mary Sue 101:
-What is a “Mary Sue”?
“Mary Sue” is a title given to characters in fanfiction (and sometimes original, professional work) who are simply perfect: They are beautiful, smart, friendly, always willing to help for nothing in exchange even if they can die, powerful, important in one way or other...you get the point (I will explain on emphasis later). These characters are often created in Roleplaying forums/chatrooms or simply as OCs with a storyline
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How to Avoid Creating a Mary Sue Tutorial
Hiya!
While reading manymanymany fan fictions and original stories with varying levels, it popped into my mind a few tricks to decrease the Mary Sue aspects from characters. I've sorted the tricks to different categories, hope they are useful! The categories are,
- What is a Mary Sue anyway? And why people create them?
- Before creating him/her, aka General attitude
- When creating him/her
- When writing about him/her
- Notes about fan characters
- Notes about original characters
- Links to other Anti Mary Sue tutorials
Most the tricks I've mentioned in this guide are good to remember all the time. However, the tricks I've marked with a star symbol (*) are optional, kind of extra tricks. I use quite harsh examples in the guide to make stuff clear, but remember that the flaws that are smaller than the ones that I mentioned can be bad, too!
On the other hand: Generally, NONE of mentioned flaws are ABSOLUTELY bad, so you don't necessarily have to throw your character into recycling bin or
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RWBY OC Bio Template
Introduction: A nice tid-bit to grab readers attention.
Name: FOLLOW. MONTY'S. RULES! Don't make me hunt you down with a freaking blood houd because you didn't get/listen to his memo! I I'll do it. I can't tell you how much this bugs me. For those who haven't read it, you can find it here. Consider these rules as divine orders from your Supreme Commander Oum. OBEY THEM!
Age: Now, what I've seen so far is most OC characters head of to little adventures at Beacon, so their age would be around 17-19, but don't limit yourself! Honestly, I find that sort of setting overdone. There is so much more in the RWBY verse than just Beacon, and you could find hardened criminals or bounty hunters of all ages!
Color: Self explanatory. You'd better freaking obey the rules or I will find you. Seriously, though, no one loves a party pooper. But for
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Jann gets bored and decides to have fun with monsters in the jungle. Her DISARM ability can keep her safe from pretty much anything in the wild. Knowing this, she can safely perform her masochistic activities. She decides to go into the east jungle, home of the Grand Vorm and her minions.

The Grand Vorm is a giant queen worm creature which has two arms which serve as mouths. The smaller Vorms are tiny and are only about a foot long. Both of their jaws aren't powerful so they depend on the queen for nutrition. They can produce a white, sticky, web-like substance to immobilize prey. One Vorm's web is strong enough to hold down a fully grown man and a whole gang can capture pretty much any animal in the jungle. Once the prey has been caught in the web, they watch it struggle against its bonds for a while, testing if it still has room to move and potentially escape. They immediately apply more webs to the movable area and secure their prey. The Vorms repeat this process until the victim can no longer properly move. The Grand Vorm will then swallow the prey whole in one of its mouths and digests it inside. The digestion process is slow and can take a few days. Once digested, the queen will secrete part of the nutrients out of her back and the colony will latch onto it to feed.

After searching for hours, she finally found a Vorm's nest and decides to let herself be captured by them. Her breathing began getting heavier, knowing what she was about to get into. She dropped her bag, removed her bra and panties, and proceeded to head into the nest.

As soon as the Vorms noticed her presence, they immediately try to shoot her with webs. Wanting to have a little fun, she tries to avoid the webs as much as she can. Jann's combat abilities prove to be too much for the little guys as she easily dodges their every attempt. Seeing she's not gonna get any perverted fun out of this, she intentionally gets caught in some of the webs. Slowly and steadily, her movements get slower and slower as more webs catch her. 

Jann's now stuck in place. She struggles against the webs but the Vorms keep shooting more as she continues to do so. Now unable to move, her DISARM ability is her only means of escape... but that'd be no fun right?Wink/Razz  The queen closes in on Jann as she still tries to struggle, adding a few more webs to her restraints. The queen opens her left mouth above Jann's head. Jann sees the insides of the mouth-arm and her arousal levels skyrocket. Seeing those bumps and the fluid inside, she can't help but breathe heavier at the thought of going through that tight and wet tunnel. Adding to her own amusement, she tries to scream and pretends to be terrified of the thing... cuz a little roleplay is always nice :D (Big Grin) 

Once swallowed, Jann savored every moment of being bound in the queen's stomach. Walls of flesh everywhere oozing out mucus, she squirms and rubs her whole body against it. After a few hours, Jann finally decided to end this little session by using her DISARM to escape.
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Kein x Jann
Decided to draw something in the middle of class cuz I got pretty bored. Turned out pretty nice in my opinion ^_^

I never really thought of a story behind this scene. Jann's hands are bound above her head when Kein suddenly steals a kiss. I just drew in the others' reactions just because. XD
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Intentionally Captured
Jann gets bored and decides to have fun with monsters in the jungle. Her DISARM ability can keep her safe from pretty much anything in the wild. Knowing this, she can safely perform her masochistic activities. She decides to go into the east jungle, home of the Grand Vorm and her minions.

The Grand Vorm is a giant queen worm creature which has two arms which serve as mouths. The smaller Vorms are tiny and are only about a foot long. Both of their jaws aren't powerful so they depend on the queen for nutrition. They can produce a white, sticky, web-like substance to immobilize prey. One Vorm's web is strong enough to hold down a fully grown man and a whole gang can capture pretty much any animal in the jungle. Once the prey has been caught in the web, they watch it struggle against its bonds for a while, testing if it still has room to move and potentially escape. They immediately apply more webs to the movable area and secure their prey. The Vorms repeat this process until the victim can no longer properly move. The Grand Vorm will then swallow the prey whole in one of its mouths and digests it inside. The digestion process is slow and can take a few days. Once digested, the queen will secrete part of the nutrients out of her back and the colony will latch onto it to feed.

After searching for hours, she finally found a Vorm's nest and decides to let herself be captured by them. Her breathing began getting heavier, knowing what she was about to get into. She dropped her bag, removed her bra and panties, and proceeded to head into the nest.

As soon as the Vorms noticed her presence, they immediately try to shoot her with webs. Wanting to have a little fun, she tries to avoid the webs as much as she can. Jann's combat abilities prove to be too much for the little guys as she easily dodges their every attempt. Seeing she's not gonna get any perverted fun out of this, she intentionally gets caught in some of the webs. Slowly and steadily, her movements get slower and slower as more webs catch her. 

Jann's now stuck in place. She struggles against the webs but the Vorms keep shooting more as she continues to do so. Now unable to move, her DISARM ability is her only means of escape... but that'd be no fun right?Wink/Razz  The queen closes in on Jann as she still tries to struggle, adding a few more webs to her restraints. The queen opens her left mouth above Jann's head. Jann sees the insides of the mouth-arm and her arousal levels skyrocket. Seeing those bumps and the fluid inside, she can't help but breathe heavier at the thought of going through that tight and wet tunnel. Adding to her own amusement, she tries to scream and pretends to be terrified of the thing... cuz a little roleplay is always nice :D (Big Grin) 

Once swallowed, Jann savored every moment of being bound in the queen's stomach. Walls of flesh everywhere oozing out mucus, she squirms and rubs her whole body against it. After a few hours, Jann finally decided to end this little session by using her DISARM to escape.
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Stella Yay ^_^
Phew! After days of working on this I finally done it XD. Once again to celebrate me surviving 2nd year in college! Yeah I still have very little creativity in doing the background but ehh looks good enough to me :3

I'm really happy about how this artwork turned out. It's looks almost exactly how I imagined the digital version before I even started! Lucky strokes I guess XD
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Yay ^_^
I can't believe I managed to go through 2nd year college! (Although I'm still waiting for my grades in the school's website) IT'S FINALLY MAH SUMMA VAYCAAAAYYYY!!!!!Birb intensifies

Here's Stella celebrating with me! I know this is just a plain drawing with absolutely no effort in the background and colors and everything and yes I know her skirt is a bit... is really short(4 fanservice!) but... oh well MY drawing XD. Though I do wanna color her in photoshop.

In case there is at least one of my watchers who actually "watch" me (as in wait for my next artwork), I apologize for the lack of content on my account. Truly sorry. Though I do wanna color her in photoshop so I guess there will be new content soon... hopefully.
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Hi! Would you introduce yourself?

-Hello, my name is Jan. Creator was too lazy to think of a surname for me.

I heard that you know person called (_Kein_). Is this correct?

-Yes. Why? What about him?

How well you know him/her? I mean, do you share your secrets or something? Or are you just random mates? Tell us about your relationship.

-*blushes* W-Well let’s just say that he’s letting me live in his house. He knows all of my secrets but it feels like I only know very few of his.

That's nice. Would you like some coffee or tea?
-Nope, I’m good.

Let's start "what if…" part.
What would he/she do if he/she heard about this interview?

-I don’t really know since you haven’t asked that many questions yet.

If he/she was an animal, what he/she would be?

-I can’t really pick one. But more on the feline category.

I can imagine… What cake would he/she be?

-A blackberry cake I guess?

If he/she became an idol, how much fans would he/she have?

-He already is. He has millions of fans.

Would it have been better if you hadn't ever met?

-No. He made my life more exciting and fun!

What if he/she found you with his/her lover?

-Pulease, that’ll never happen!

How would he/she react if you would say "Would you marry me" down on your kneels?

-Based on his personality, I think he would just laugh at me. *looks down*

Imagine him/her to catwalk. What will happen?

-All the girls would get nosebleeds, definitely.


Now questions about your feelings and thoughts towards him/her.
What did you think when you saw him/her first time? What was your first impression of him/her? 

-I thought he was a nice and friendly guy.

What are the best features in him/her?

-For me, his eyes.

What are the nastiest features?

-His attitude is sometimes unbearable.

What do you think, would he/she kill?

-He has already killed countless people. I think he would even kill me if I’m not careful.

If would, then why?

-He finds it amusing and says that it’s a good way to prevent overpopulation.

Could you see him/her in marriage with someone?

-Unfortunately no. But it would be a dream come true if he would propose to m- Wait! What did I just say?!?!

Is he/she tsundere or yandere? Why?

-Neither, he doesn’t want to love anyone.

Seme or uke? Tell us why.

-He can be both(based on experience ¬////¬). But mostly seme.

Hero or villain? And again, why?

-It depends on whether everything is too peaceful or too chaotic. He is mostly villainous since it’s peaceful most of the time without him plotting something.

"No pain, no gain." Would he/she say that?

-I can imagine him saying that.


Now is time to reveal all (_Kein_)'s secrets. 
Tell us does our victim have any terribly humiliating moments.

-Newp, the chances of that happening are lower than 0.0000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000000001%

That's interesting… Have you ever discover him/her from embarrassing situations?

-No. But he has discovered me in those.

Everyone has some weakness. Which are chinks in his/her armour?

-I don’t think he has any weakness.

Has he/she ever been broken-hearted?

-As I said earlier, he doesn’t want to fall in love(sadly).

What makes him/her extremely happy?

-When it’s Saturday and he has his way with me in his dungeon.

What he/she would never say publicly but has told to you about it?

-His alter egos.

Before this ends…
Should we tell him/her about this interview?

-I don’t mind… Wait NO PLEASE DON’T!!!

Should we show this to him/her?

-NNNOOOOOO!!!!

Why?

-I don’t think it’s a good idea cuz he might punish me in the dungeon if he finds out!

Kein: *Whispers* I already know…

Jan: EEEEKKK!!!


Thank you for interview. Could you tag someone before you leave?

Kein:  Sorry, she can’t right now. She’s too busy tasting my whip.


Blank meme: amai-kun.deviantart.com/art/OC…

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krystlekmy Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Hello, Thankies so much for the fav and watched me :blowkiss:
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blackrock89 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Student General Artist
Your welcome:) Love your GiD/DiD works!^_^ Also planning on doing those memes if I have the time. (College schedules TwT)
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krystlekmy Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awwww, glad you loves my GiD/DiD works :blush: Really? tag me if you have time to finish them :icondragonwant:
It's okay. Life is always busy :pat:
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Trouso Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2014
Thanks for watching!
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parangsakti Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Woho, your drawings aren't bad at all. Better than mine.

Welcome to dA
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blackrock89 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014  Student General Artist
Why thank you ^^. I love your creativity with bondage gear.
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parangsakti Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2014
Heh, nothing that Gord, MetalBondageCom and ChristopherFetish hasn't done
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xXSweeneyLovettXx Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the fave :D
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SummerSky1031 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Hobbyist
Hi, thank you for watching me! Although haven't published anything..
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blackrock89 Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2014  Student General Artist
No problem :D (Big Grin) 
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